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This is my first and new passion-project short story!
One day, I asked my fiance to give me a starting line to work off of. He said; " And out of the darkness it crept. " With that opening line, I built this!I changed the " it " part in the opening line because, truthfully, I didn't want people thinking they had just read some strange IT fanfic. :)
This story is not a part of my larger universe, but it is very personal and close to my heart. I am proud of it, though I can appreciate how some won't take to it. I tried to infuse elements of horror into the writting, which is not my forte, really. You see, I can appreciate horror for what it is and what the genre can do for stories. I can watch " horror-light " movies, but I, myself, don't like the effects they have on me. When I went to see the new IT in the theatre, I almost walked out. It was such a terrible experience for me! XD But, at home, where I can hide behind a pillow and turn on the lights, I'll watch something like The Babadook (go see it!). But, you fine readers get the point. I scared myself a little while writing some of this! lol
Any way, I'm curious to see what people think its about, and what all of the little details and characters represent!
Constructive criticism is welcome!

Thank you and enjoy!
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Lonewolf-Sparrowhawk's avatar
Careful with your formatting; your paragraphs and paragraph spacing are a little all over the place.  Cool story!